Change in osmo-gsm-manuals[master]: common/chapters: extend gb/ns2 chapters

fixeria gerrit-no-reply at lists.osmocom.org
Tue Apr 6 16:43:28 UTC 2021


fixeria has posted comments on this change. ( https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393 )

Change subject: common/chapters: extend gb/ns2 chapters
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Patch Set 4:

(9 comments)

https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc 
File common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc:

https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@13 
PS4, Line 13: There are a multiple
Looks odd to me, maybe "there exist multiple ..."?


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@62 
PS4, Line 62: hdlcX
consistency: `hdlcX`


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@96 
PS4, Line 96:   SNS-WEIGHT procedures
missing dot ending sentence


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@124 
PS4, Line 124: * No use of the NS-RESET, NS-BLOCK or NS-UNBLOCK procedures
missing dot ending sentence


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@158 
PS4, Line 158: parts
parts:

* foo,
* bar,
* zoo.

(punctuation)


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@171 
PS4, Line 171: represent
represents


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@172 
PS4, Line 172: by
via the VTY?


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@180 
PS4, Line 180: persitant
persistent


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@185 
PS4, Line 185: describe
describes



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