<p><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393">View Change</a></p><p>9 comments:</p><ul style="list-style: none; padding: 0;"><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0;"><p><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc">File common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc:</a></p><ul style="list-style: none; padding: 0;"><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@13">Patch Set #4, Line 13:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">There are a multiple</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">Looks odd to me, maybe "there exist multiple ..."?</p></li><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@62">Patch Set #4, Line 62:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">hdlcX</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">consistency: `hdlcX`</p></li><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@96">Patch Set #4, Line 96:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">  SNS-WEIGHT procedures</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">missing dot ending sentence</p></li><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@124">Patch Set #4, Line 124:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">* No use of the NS-RESET, NS-BLOCK or NS-UNBLOCK procedures</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">missing dot ending sentence</p></li><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@158">Patch Set #4, Line 158:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">parts</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">parts:</p><ul><li>foo,</li><li>bar,</li><li>zoo.</li></ul><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">(punctuation)</p></li><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@171">Patch Set #4, Line 171:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">represent</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">represents</p></li><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@172">Patch Set #4, Line 172:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">by</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">via the VTY?</p></li><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@180">Patch Set #4, Line 180:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">persitant</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">persistent</p></li><li style="margin: 0; padding: 0 0 0 16px;"><p style="margin-bottom: 4px;"><a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393/4/common/chapters/gb-ns2.adoc@185">Patch Set #4, Line 185:</a> <code style="font-family:monospace,monospace">describe</code></p><p style="white-space: pre-wrap; word-wrap: break-word;">describes</p></li></ul></li></ul><p>To view, visit <a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393">change 23393</a>. To unsubscribe, or for help writing mail filters, visit <a href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/settings">settings</a>.</p><div itemscope itemtype="http://schema.org/EmailMessage"><div itemscope itemprop="action" itemtype="http://schema.org/ViewAction"><link itemprop="url" href="https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/23393"/><meta itemprop="name" content="View Change"/></div></div>

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