[MERGED] osmo-gsm-manuals[master]: fix various grammar and typos in: preface, cell-broadcast

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Neels Hofmeyr gerrit-no-reply at lists.osmocom.org
Sun Sep 24 20:54:27 UTC 2017


Neels Hofmeyr has submitted this change and it was merged.

Change subject: fix various grammar and typos in: preface, cell-broadcast
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fix various grammar and typos in: preface, cell-broadcast

Change-Id: I0c61ad0e824b0d62bb9332f2208b247d3852dbb5
---
M common/chapters/cell-broadcast.adoc
M common/chapters/preface.adoc
2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

Approvals:
  Harald Welte: Looks good to me, approved
  Jenkins Builder: Verified



diff --git a/common/chapters/cell-broadcast.adoc b/common/chapters/cell-broadcast.adoc
index d439128..a87efae 100644
--- a/common/chapters/cell-broadcast.adoc
+++ b/common/chapters/cell-broadcast.adoc
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 include::osmocom-cbs.msc[]
 ----
 
-==== What'a miaaing
+==== What's missing
 
 What's missing (for production operation in larger networks)
 
diff --git a/common/chapters/preface.adoc b/common/chapters/preface.adoc
index 975dcca..d85e318 100644
--- a/common/chapters/preface.adoc
+++ b/common/chapters/preface.adoc
@@ -133,24 +133,24 @@
 Some of the founders of the Osmocom project have established sysmocom as
 a company to provide products and services related to Osmocom.
 
-sysmocom and its staff are the by far the largest developers and
-contributors to the Osmocom mobile network infrastructure projects.
+sysmocom and its staff have by far contributed the largest part of development
+and maintenance to the Osmocom mobile network infrastructure projects.
 
 As part of this work, sysmocom has also created the manual you are
 reading.
 
 At sysmocom, we draw a clear line between what is the Osmocom FOSS
 project, and what is sysmocom as a commercial entity.  Under no
-circumstances requires participation in the FOSS projects any commercial
+circumstances does participation in the FOSS projects require any commercial
 relationship with sysmocom as a company.
 
 
 === Corrections
 
-We have prepared this manual in the hope it will guide you through the
+We have prepared this manual in the hope that it will guide you through the
 process of installing, configuring and debugging your deployment of
 cellular network infrastructure elements using Osmocom software.  If
-you do find errors, mistakes and/or omissions, or have any suggestions
+you do find errors, typos and/or omissions, or have any suggestions
 on missing topics, please do take the extra time and let us know.
 
 
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
 Osmocom software or those of traditional telecom suppliers.
 
 GSM knowledge has many different fields, from radio planning through
-site installation through to core network configuration/administration.
+site installation to core network configuration/administration.
 
 The detailed skills required will depend on the type of installation
 and/or deployment that you are planning, as well as its associated

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Gerrit-MessageType: merged
Gerrit-Change-Id: I0c61ad0e824b0d62bb9332f2208b247d3852dbb5
Gerrit-PatchSet: 2
Gerrit-Project: osmo-gsm-manuals
Gerrit-Branch: master
Gerrit-Owner: Neels Hofmeyr <nhofmeyr at sysmocom.de>
Gerrit-Reviewer: Harald Welte <laforge at gnumonks.org>
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Gerrit-Reviewer: Neels Hofmeyr <nhofmeyr at sysmocom.de>



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